My Music Composition

Haha my second music composition in this year... look nice ?
take me about 1 month and a few days more to complete it...
the picture i scan above is just the introduction for the music only...
everyone says that it sounds great, grand, and sadness.
well this piece i use the key in C-minor as my maestro - Ludwig Van Beethoven
like it so much.
Joseph say it got the feeling of moonlight sonata,great i like his comment
hope 1 day he will be a great pianist...and i will get free entrance for his performance
hehehehe.....don't tell him this ar=.=

i get so many comments for my composition(bad and good ones)
the comments are:
1. great nice introduction
2. feels like the storms are coming
3. i feel loneliness, sadness
that the good comment

for the bad comment...
1.too much pedaling is used
2. the introduction is nothing special
3.it just like playing scales and appregios
4.and it sounds noisy

well for those who give comment (bad or good) i really appreciate it
because your comments can make me improve more in composing...
nvm although this piece is NOTHING SPECIAL(to the person who said it)
but can you composed it? can you composed it when you have no theory about composition?
by the way i tell you i just grade 3 and learn nothing about composition. How many people can compose thier own songs/music/piece in Alor Star?
i think got less then 7% knows=.=
why? because composing is not as easy as you think it was....
it need inspiration...idea...a strong composing theory...
but if you are Mozart ok nvm just write music out of your mind will do...
( that was what Mozart did)

So....for this piece i will keep it for the next 2 years coming for further modification...
until everyone says that is piece is amazing....i will stop modify it just like my maestro have done
He (Beethoven )keep his composition private and always modify it bar by bar until a final and great piece is done. no wonder his composition is so great.